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Supernatural (Part 6) "Facts"

15:17 Jan 10 2014
Times Read: 399


THIS IS THE LAST PART, STORY BEGINS BELOW ON PART 1 ENTRY



Well the fact is that when Nacho arrived to Alvaro's house so exalted he found my dear classmate and supposed big friend taking my bycicle to the crime scene and when Nacho asked about me this guy said this bullshit "somebody assaulted us and tried to take our bycicles away but Victor refused to yield and the criminal gave him a serious smacking, i'm affraid he's not coming back in himself well" my cousin asked where i was again and Alvaro showed him the way. My body was pulled along 10 meters from the bottom of the palm tree where it was dropped originaly, only my cap was still there you could see the creep marks all the way to one side right next to the dirty swimming pool. I was drowned in my own vomit, the blood vessels of my abdomen, chest, shoulders, neck, nape and face were all nasty busted and eyes were all outpouring. My cousin moved my head and vomit went out as i could finally breath after about 20 to 30 minutes. When the ambullance arrived i called my cousin with my hands asking him to come with me, for that moment i remembered everything but i wasn't able to speak. Once in the hospital first word i could speak to the police was "Alvaro".



Alvaro was arrested but never judged i don't know why, he went out of jail after a week, his family threaten with envolve my cousin into the crime if Alvaro stayed in jail or if something happen to him once he was out. For the safety of everyone i was moved to live with my grandpa's in another state of the country so far from Guadalajara, Mexico the city where it all happened.





THE END


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LadyCara
LadyCara
16:35 Jan 10 2014

Very interesting, I'm sure this was all very confusing as a young boy, glad you found your way back. Thankyou for sharing your story.





frozenVheart
frozenVheart
08:38 Jan 11 2014

Ohhh my.. U poor thing...and that was woow





8of9
8of9
05:13 Jun 10 2014

Now that was scary and traumatic. Sorry that you went through such a horrific ordeal.





 

Supernatural (Part 5) "Back to the Body"

14:23 Jan 10 2014
Times Read: 400


Nacho took his bicycle and went full speed all the way to Alvaro's house, i was above him as high as the street electricity cables and once we were at Alvaro's place the last thing i remember is myself going above the wall of the house where my body was but i can't remember how i got inside my body again, this part is so confusing. Next thing i remember after crossing the wall from above is the voice of Alvaro talking with my cousin and getting closer, then a strong vertigo and after that i opened up my eyes again and took a deep breath. I didn't recognized the place nor the view and i tough i was outside our house because i remembered my uncle at the typewriter like in some kind of dream and i tried to speak, in my mind i wanted to say to Nacho "call my uncle he's inside" but i couldn't.



(Continues on Part 6 and last)


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Supernatural (Part 4) "The Fall"

13:57 Jan 10 2014
Times Read: 402


I don't know for sure how long it took but finally i started falling from the nowhere i was to the sky of my neighborhood and keep on falling in direction somehow like from the point i ascended and now straight to my cousin "Nacho" who was at our room listening loud music and kind of angry, when i was as high as this room on the second floor i got inside trough the glass just like a ghost and stand in front of him, instantly he jumped out of bed and turned the music off. I clearly remember myself going after him but he was running and i was floating all the time, he stopped in front of my uncle who was at his typewriter and say to him "something happened to Victor, i'm leaving, i'll be back" and he left the house with my uncle's face like trying to figure out what the hell is wrong with this guys...



(Continues on part 5)


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Supernatural (Part 3) "The Ascend"

13:22 Jan 10 2014
Times Read: 404


After that last breath it was all dark and i felt the sensation that i started floating as the black atmosphere faded to grey and the higher i was the brighter it turns until it all was kind of incandescent white, then just white and suddenly i stopped. I don't know where my soul was at that moment and what was happening there but i felt more than one pressence maybe three or four entities up there like discussing about what was going to happen to me.



(Continues on part 4)


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Supernatural (Part 2) "Last Breath"

13:13 Jan 10 2014
Times Read: 405


After my cousin left i asked Alvaro what's going on, i was so scared he told me "come with me to my neighbor's house" wich was empty, first we left the bicycles at Alvaro's garage and when we entered to the house next door i saw this swiming pool filled with dark green water and he walked up to a big glass wall and said "come and see this" there was a couple motorcycles abandoned and i say ok, i want to leave right now as i turned around and started to walk out but before i could get totally out of the house he took my neck and squeezed it so hard with both hands from back of me and i tought to myself "i knew it" he started to pull me close to the wall next to his house so no one could see us from his parents window, at a moment we were next to a palm tree and finally i could take his hands off but i was almost totally out of oxigen and when i took a breath the sound was too loud and strange so he made me shut my mouth with his hands and that was the end of my pulsate.



(Continues on part 3)



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Supernatural (Part 1) "The Game"

12:38 Jan 10 2014
Times Read: 406


First this is a real story that normally i don't talk about and i never tought i was going to write down.



I died for the first time at the age of 13 strangulated by a classmate aged 15 his name is Alvaro we were at a catholic school and usually when we finish classes a group of 4 or 5 friends ride our bikes to a girls school where Alvaro's girlfriend attended. That noon someone made a joke on Alvaro in front of Claudia (his girlfriend) and i saw the creepy look in the eyes of my classmate wich gave me a bad feeling due to a recent attempt of strangulation he done to me with a belt at his house after we watched a horror movie but in that occasion someone ringed at his house and he released me after a horrible episode and said to me it was only a game. Well, after we left Claudia's school each one took the way to our respective homes. At this period of my life i was living at my aunt's house due my mother's dead a year before (1990). That afternoon Alvaro came to our place when my cousin "Nacho" and i were about to go for a ride in our bicycles and he asked us to stay a while and play some basketball on the backyard and we did so for a short time and then decided to keep on with our ride, Alvaro's place was somehow on the way we supposed to take so the 3 of us rided our bikes togheter and when we were at his place Alvaro instead of stay there and let us keep going, he asked my cousin to give us a moment in private because he wanted to talk to me and my cousin felt pushed out and left the place so indignated.



(Continue on Next Entry)


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